Searria H.

Oooohhhhh!! That makes sense! Now that I get it, I'll give you 8/10 points. I thought they were singing. -Sea-

Interesting little story. I agree with what everyone has said already. You use the word "embark" twice in the story, and even though the two are fairly far apart, I ...

Wow. Much better than I could do. :wink: :D \ The texture of the sea monster's body was very good, but I think you could add a little more depth ...

6/10. Ummm. What are they doing? -Sea-

Howdy! I'm Searria H., but please call me Sea. I'm sure a million people have told you this, but don't forget to read the rules under "help and support." Welcome ...

I personally love ginger hair! I wouldn't look good with it, though. Hmmm. You could go brown with blonde highlights, or something. I don't know. I'm not good with haircolor. ...

Well, Hiya Ryan! Yes, Nate is the creator of the site. You have to post two reviews before you can post your own stuff. Soo... Thrillers, huh? I havn't read ...

Hi. I agree with CastlesintheSky about everything she said about the feel of the piece. I really like your drawing. I don't know much about art, but my sister does. ...

Hey, there! I'm Searria, but you can call me Sea. Love your username! It's cool to know that we're on of the top 101 writing sites! :wink: I think you'll ...

Hello, and Welcome! I like to write about fantasy too! Let me know if you post anything! If you need anything, just PM me! :D Have fun and enjoy the ...

OOH! Creepy! :twisted: I agree with everything that Rubric said, but I have a few other things to say. When I was little my great-grandmother told me things, and even ...

In such a short story, you were able to create enormous amounts of emotion, and attached me to the characters, even though I hardly knew them. For that, I want ...

First of all, much better descriptions!!!!! My dad had been able to talk to animals and my mom could breath underwater. "Breathe" I couldn’t wait until I was eighteen so ...

Grrr. I had a review all written out, but when I tried to submit it, my computer wouldn't let me, and I lost it. So let's try again. You and ...

You really needed to rate this for language, first of all. Secondly, I'm jelous. Very interesting storyline. I'm not sure you needed the character discriptions at the beginning. It might ...